ballstarcly 发表于 2022-1-23 15:47   全显示 1楼
大大的文风比较细致，有种娓娓道来的感觉，而且这两章人物也比较符合校园学生设定，不是那种女的一碰就变痴女，男的一见女的就完全不顾客观环境推到就上。人物心态转化比较符合现实，有较强的代入感，后面有肉戏，希望也能精雕细琢，肉本身个人觉得很难写出花了，关键是肉戏前后的烘托和桥段能和文章整体人物设定契合。期待大大更新。


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