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[snow_xefd] 【暮霭凝香】 第七章:好朋友

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终于又看到大侠的更新了,满心欢喜。作者还真是用心在写啊!结构层次严谨缜密,排序准确,采用倒序式手法展开回忆,着重描写小星和小兰的青梅竹马似地童贞回忆。希望作者能够全文都有一条清晰的文章脉络主线,有始有终,前后呼应。当然还是希望作者的H文不要等得太久,要不发在这里也不合适!!!首先,建议大侠不要将本文写成主人公一人征战逐美尽收江山美人的情景,可以写成以小星为主,多点男主人公为辅的多点开花又不乱主次的文章主线,比如说天龙八部,以段誉为主,又有萧峰、虚竹等大侠主线,本人很是欢喜。其次,希望大侠给文章定个章回和字数,比如说120章等,不要无休止的续写下去,闹不好如同逍遥小散仙之类无下文了。再次,希望大侠写文还是以传统道德为主线串写下去微妙,可以适当加些性虐待、乱伦,不宜过多,多则生腻,群交、多P也可穿插,也不宜过多,多则成了鸡肋。期待中…………
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